Thursday, 4 August 2016

Hoverbike Advert:

For 3 days, LS2 were working in pairs to create an advert on a futuristic hover bike. Harlem and I made a amazing ad about hover bikes, we used persuasive language to hook in a potential buyer with this ad. This advertisement needed to be a very persuasive, you added features that needed to hook in the viewer/reader. This was a fun activity with my partner.

1 comment:

Robyn Anderson said...

Well done boys! I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you haven't drawn our attention to them. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.

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