Today, is my first blog post for activity 2. Vinicius and Tom are the official mascots for the Rio Olympics 2016. Vinicius and Tom have a 3 episode Series but I chose to summarize the 1st episode. Two character come from different places but are created by the people and landscape of Rio. Both are reunited two flares (I don't know what to call it) lead to each other and creates a high-five from both Tom and Vini.
7 comments:
Hi Pote
You have retold episode 1 really good. You gave me a clear picture what was happening in the episode. This is optional but maybe put the episode links for your fellow bloggers to watch.
But Great Work
Hi Pote!
I completely agree with Mia. You have summarised the episode quite well and highlighted the most important parts. In the future, you can also summarise an episode by breaking it down into three sections - beginning, middle and end. You can then describe what happened at the beginning of the episode, in the middle and at the end. It is a nice way to structure your answer and might help you to clarify your thinking. Just a thought...
Keep up the great work, Pote. You are doing really well and I'm already looking forward to reading your next post!
Cheers, Rachel
Hi Pote
I really like your summary (Links for the videos or no links) and I think it is very cool. I was also stuck on what to name those spheres of light (I just came up with that right now. Anyway, great work!
Daniel
Hello Pote, the way you explained what the video was about sounds exactly what happened.
Hi Pote. I like your summary on Vinicius and Tom, I also agree with Mia (and Rachel) on adding links because the viewers might be missing out on cool videos. I would call those sphere's orbs, anyway good luck to you and everyone else doing this.
Hi Pote,
I really like your summary. I really think you should add the link to your post because people might want to see it. I chose to do a summary of episode 2. Great Work.
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