Original: The boy threw the rock with anger at the police officer in the middle of the concert, because he was very offended of the way the officer blocking his view.
DRAFT: The boy threw the rock at the security guard in the middle of concert, because he was very offended of the way guard blocking his view.
Today, Cj & I were working hard on fixing our group sentences by using DRAFT. It was very easy to fix other people sentences and even adding words for their new sentence.
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